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The ship with dinner still warm
18 s · 9:16
The hook
The dinner was still warm.
Style

Watercolor ChronicleInked lines and soft washes, like an old explorer's journal.
- Faceless
- English voice-over
- Music included
- 6 scenes
You change the topic. About 4 minutes to make.
Narration · 18 seconds
- The dinner was still warm.
- Plates on the table, a cup still steaming.
- In 1872, sailors boarded this ship, drifting silently across the open Atlantic.
- No crew anywhere.
- The lifeboat, gone.
- So where did they go?
A faceless mystery short, 15 seconds. Hook in the very first second: 'They found the ship drifting... and dinner was still warm.' In 1872 sailors board an abandoned ship in the open Atlantic: plates on the table, a cup still steaming, the lifeboat gone, no crew. End on the unanswered question: where did they go?



